~Katie-Yoshi pointed out almost everything I was going to say! I second their comment and add that the colorwork is very, very nice throughout this but that the girl's mouth looks awkward. I know it's a typical anime technique (done to make the animation easier) but since this is a still image I think a more realistic take on the mouth would look better here.
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